Monday, April 26, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Ally McBeal “These Are The Days”

by David E. Kelley (53 pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: This story is a bit slow until Ally is made Judge in one of the cases. Her decision is a good curve ball.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal.
  • Formatting: Standard except for a flashback at the end where there are 22 scenes (A-V) from previous episodes.
  • Act Structure: Act I, Act II, Act III, Act IV.

Note: Page 37 of the script was missing. This page revealed the ending of a major character’s speech.

Monday, April 19, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Ally McBeal “Theme of life”

by David E. Kelley (52 pages)


Awards: 1999 Banff Rockie Award - Best Comedy

1998 Nominated for an Emmy - Outstanding Writing for a Comedy Series


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Steady through three story-lines.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal.
  • Formatting: Standard.
  • Act Structure: Act I, Act II, Act III, Act IV. 43 Scenes.

Note: Episode with Janet Reno playing herself in a minor character role.

Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Ally McBeal “The Promise”

by David E. Kelley (51 pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Quick. Characters get to the main idea in one or two lines of dialogue.
  • Screen Visibility: Description mainly in log line
  • Formatting: Standard for Ally McBeal
  • Act Structure: Act I, Act II, Act II, Act IV.

38 Scenes


Note: Script basically tells three stories about sexual behavior between men and women. One in court, one in the office and one in both.

Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Script-of-the-week: Ally McBeal “The Affair”

by David E. Kelley (52 Pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: First two acts fly by with a great moment of suspense at the end of the second act.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal.
  • Formatting: Standard formatting for this program.
  • Structure: IV Acts & 38 Scenes.

Notes: For writers who want to focus on hour long comedy with dramatic flair.

Script-of-the-Week: Ally McBeal “Ally McBeal” Pilot Episode

by David E. Kelley (46 pages)


Awards: None that I could find


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Quick.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal, which is standard for a TV series.
  • Formatting: Somewhat standard formatting with some action lines describing Ally’s thinking.
  • Act Structure: Act I, Act II, Act III, Act IV

Note: For a pilot episode, the initial character development is quite sparse demonstrating an effective lack of need for lengthy development.