by No credit given (45 pages)
Points of Interest:
- Pacing: A little slow. A couple of jokes fall a little flat, probably because they are dated.
- Screen Visibility: Minimum.
- Formatting: Sporadic. Spacing was off in some areas. It appeared to be more of a function of poor photocopying.
Recommendation: For writers who want to improve their sitcom writing. NOTE: It appears this copy of the script belonged to Nicholas Colasanto (Coach) since there are notes/cues directed to that character
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