Monday, June 28, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Married...With Children “The Stepford Bundy”

by Michael J. Prescott (48 pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Quick in the beginning but slows down near the end.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal as is normal for TV scripts.
  • Formatting: Quite standard with generous double spacing for characters and dialogue and single space ALL CAPS for action. Specific screen direction in parentheses.
  • Dialogue: Euphemistic dirty jokes in the first couple of lines that continue throughout.
  • Action: Action lines contain only the minimal amount of information required for the scene.
  • Act Structure: Act One, Scene One. Act Two(typo), Scene Two. Act One, Scene Three. Act One, Scene Four. Act Two, Scene One. Act Two, Scene Two. Act Two, Scene Three.

Monday, June 21, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Arrested Development “Pilot”

by Mitchell Hurwitz (34 pages)


Awards: 2004 won an Emmy for Outstanding Writing for a Comedy Series


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Very Quick. Lots of short scenes.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal.
  • Formatting: Traditional formatting. Subtitle or “Chyron” is used to indicate flashbacks.
  • Dialogue: Extremely well crafted and well timed.
  • Action: Description of character movement in accordance with the timing of many jokes.
  • Act Structure: Act One, Act Two, Tag. 52 Scenes.

Note: Only a two act episode with a follow up Tag comprised of short “false prelude” to a potential future episode which never happened (or was never aired as part of the series).

Monday, June 14, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Simpsons “Dacin’ Homer”

by Kevin Levine & David Isaacs(53 pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:

  • Pacing: Good. Episode starts with arriving at a baseball game, preliminaries of standard games and then the game itself. Act One ends with Homer being offered the job as team mascot.
  • Screen Visibility: Minimal description of surroundings except when specifically linked to jokes.
  • Formatting: A fair amount of description is used to direct the camera.
  • Dialogue: Original and funny. There is a fair amount of Ad Lib dialogue peppered in the action category.
  • Action: Extended montage sequence from A - Q.
  • Act Structure: Act One, Act Two, Act Three. Approximately 60 scenes.

Note: The episode that aired had quite a few differences from the written script. It seems most of the changes were made for brevity.

Monday, June 7, 2010

Script-of-the-Week: Simpsons “Bart Vs. Thanksgiving”

by George Meyer (54 pages)


Awards: None that I could find.


Points of Interest:


  • Pacing: Tight, with Bart ruining Thanksgiving by the end of Act One.
  • Screen Visibility: Actual look of the cartoon is not evident but there is a lot of additional description pertaining to the characters actions.
  • Formatting: Spacing between the end of a scene and a slug line is quite tight.
  • Dialogue: Marge’s distinctive grumble, is described as an “annoyed murmur”. Some lines are just written as Ad Lib, in the action.
  • Action: Use of Camera direction. Occasional ad Lib dialogue for some characters. Montage sequence laid out alphabetically.
  • Act Structure: Act One, Act Two, Act Three. Approximately 70 scenes.

Note: Nothing additional to note.