by Kevin Levine & David Isaacs(53 pages)
Awards: None that I could find.
Points of Interest:
- Pacing: Good. Episode starts with arriving at a baseball game, preliminaries of standard games and then the game itself. Act One ends with Homer being offered the job as team mascot.
- Screen Visibility: Minimal description of surroundings except when specifically linked to jokes.
- Formatting: A fair amount of description is used to direct the camera.
- Dialogue: Original and funny. There is a fair amount of Ad Lib dialogue peppered in the action category.
- Action: Extended montage sequence from A - Q.
- Act Structure: Act One, Act Two, Act Three. Approximately 60 scenes.
Note: The episode that aired had quite a few differences from the written script. It seems most of the changes were made for brevity.
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