Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Script-of-the-week: Rear Window

by John Michael Hayes (based on the short by Cornell Woolrich)


This script is a massive 161 page turner that Hitchcock followed quite closely. Following are some main points of note:


  1. The script is very long - new slug lines for each camera angle, followed by gigantic page-long descriptions.
  2. Although long, the writing is quite tight.  Fairly accurate descriptions can be found in the movies action.
  3. The script is a good character study - characters are complex and developed.
  4. Good plotting - the script moves quickly and effectively conveys a lot in a short time.
  5. It’s too long - today this script would need to be much and could streamlined accordingly.


All in all it was an enjoyable read even if I did skim large parts of it.


I would recommend this script for writers who want to improve their pacing and character development.

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