My copy was clearly re-written since it was full of typos but enjoyable all the same. Here are my notes:
- Pacing was a little slow in the beginning but picked up over time.
- Main characters are well defined with a few supporting characters appearing to be less clear.
- Emotion builds up and fulfills its objective by the end.
- Although written before Legally Blonde it could be describe as LG with Vampires.
- A good mix of horror and comedy with some very funny moments.
- Although the teenage dialogue is dated I imagine it was appropriate for the time.
I would recommend this script for all screenwriters and especially those looking to improve their comedic writing.
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